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Foolish Pride
Contributed by
jaycee
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Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 02:47:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Brain running in sixth
began to suspect
But accusation was pointless
my thought she'd deflect
And dump me she did
'cause she never lied
Let it worry me? I scoffed
No, I've got pride
Then those feelings returned
as they logically must
And capacity to love
decayed into rust
Engineer builds the walls
to keep out the pain
but I turn around
it's found me again
Having put faith in my mind
wish I could rip it apart
Should have trusted what's right
and followed my heart
Copyright ©
jaycee
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2005-08-17 14:47:13]
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Re: Foolish Pride
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by Stellar on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 04:13:39 PM AEST
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This was awesome! Keep up the great writes!
Take care,
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Re: Foolish Pride
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 04:30:24 PM AEST
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We humans tend to over analyze things to the point of destruction at times in life. The mind only goes by what it sees and many times misconstrues the truth. The heart is usually the most reliable. This is a great poem and I have had these occasions in my life as probably most have. .
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Re: Foolish Pride
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by sprinter27 on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 01:16:36 PM AEST
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good, write, jaycee. it's sad and sad that it is true... but it's good. well done, keep up the good work! and take care.
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Re: Foolish Pride
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 08:39:40 PM AEST
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Beautiful write, Jaycee.... although it is so sad..... I am so sorry....
If you need to talk....you know where to find me.
Jenni |
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