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I Can't Believe It Was You
Contributed by
Spell_Weaver
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Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 02:19:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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When I bleed, it's from the heart
I don't think you bleed at all
I trusted you to walk with me
And catch me if I fall
You don't change for anyone
You've always been a mess
I saw you as a friend; I was blind
In misery, I wish you the best
Did you ever really care?
Would you have really held my hand
when I let my baby go?
Or are you content to stand
and watch me wreathe in pain?
I guess I'm waking from this dream
How long was I in this trance?
Is friendship what it seems?
I've never really been a pro
at mending broken hearts
But the wound is deeper still
between friends who are torn apart...
Copyright ©
Spell_Weaver
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2005-08-17 14:19:02]
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Re: I Can't Believe It Was You
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by Unbreakable on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 02:33:01 PM AEST
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Great write, it flows really well and I have to say, I definitely agree, there really is no other feeling like knowing that a friend has stabbed you in the back...good work, keep it up
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Re: I Can't Believe It Was You
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by Stellar on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 04:43:57 PM AEST
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I think everyone has a story to tell about a friend like that. However, I believe that they are all apart of our lives for a reason. True friends, however, are the ones who stand the test of time.
Take care,
Liz |
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