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Good-Bye my friends
Contributed by
spooky
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Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 12:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I'm sorry,,to those I've hurt,,,
I'm sorry,,for the words that I've wrote,,
I'm sorry,,For hurting my friends,,
( I'm sorry,,,,)
I Written words for poeple,,
who's hearts were in sorrow,,,,
for who's friendship,,was precious,,
those friends who meant so much to me,,,
I'm sorry,,for letting you down,,
( for this I'm sorry,,,)
Time away is what I need,,
the writting stops now,,,,
If writting hurts my friends,,,
The writting stops now,,,
no more,,
words of wisdow,,
for I hurt my friends by doing so,,
( I sorry for hurting you,,,)
I thought words would help,,
the soul would be happy,,
I tryed to put smiles on faces,,
make dreams come true,,
and to all,,things were possible,,,
( my fault,,I'm sorry,,)
I feel I've hurt more than I've written,,
I"m sorry for hurting my friends,,,
The writting stops now,,,
please dont be mad for what I've written,,
as it's just a piece of paper,,,
( I'm sorry as I write this for you,,,
My friends in words,,you'll always be,,
Forever,,,,)
Good-nite,,my friends in words,,,
The writting stops now,,,,
,,,,,,,,,Spooky,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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spooky
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2003-01-14 12:00:00]
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Re: Good-Bye my friends
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 12:06:36 PM AEST
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OMG Noooo who could you have possibly hurt with your beautiful writings???? Don't you dare go anywhere!!!! I will wither away without reading your poetry Craig....you cannot go away....this tears my heart to read this....i cannot even imagine you not being here, you come back and write your hearts desires and passions out...grrrr i am messaging you....and we will talk...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.
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Re: Good-Bye my friends
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 12:13:34 PM AEST
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Ok I'm freaking out How could you have hurt someone Craig? Whats up with this!? Youve always helped me! I wrote you A thank you for it in one of my poems! Your words inspire me!
Christina |
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Re: Good-Bye my friends
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 03:14:47 PM AEST
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I don't understand this... who have you hurt?? Or think you have hurt... Your words are always s beautiful, Craig... you can't leave us with this... you have always put a smile on my face..and a song in my heart with your poems as well as your comments.. I hope you reconsider your decision...
Hugs,
Jenni |
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Re: Good-Bye my friends
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 05:56:36 AM AEST
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| Dear Spooky your heart is not dumb how can you stop.. no spirit on earth would stop you. you never hurt any body. if you are tired a little take rest for a while and get up with early dawn....I am your best friend you must follow this my advice.what do you say my dear friend...Venkat |
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Re: Good-Bye my friends
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 02:25:47 PM AEST
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Oooohhh No you don't Craig!!!! We all feel like this sometimes but you have many many friends here! Maybe Vencat is right and you need a break; I'm taking a break in a way only 'cause of the flu.. not 'cause I could ever quit writing.. maybe a nice long walk in some fields near you, or your favorite foods, or a nice lengthy browse in a cozy bookstore, or a quiet evening spent will make you feel happier, for truely we all love you here and do not want you to go. You have not hurt anyone with your words from the heart and special style and grace, and truth; Now. I ask you to please eat some ice cream or a yummy thing, light a candle and look for the truth in the flames, think of those of us you care for, know we are holding you in our hearts. Do whatever makes a big happy smile come upon your face and then come back; I for one would truely miss your poetry and friendship..
huggs and love always Nessa
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Re: Good-Bye my friends
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 09:39:21 PM AEST
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| I know exactly how you feel friend. I know I'm still new here, but I feel I have met a couple of friends already. *S* I wrote a poem almost similar to this in the poetry site I left. The friend I wrote it for didn't care about how I felt or wanted to say. You have alot of friends here and you would hurt them just by leaving. *S* Cynthia |
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