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Sand of Time
Contributed by
gwenevere
on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 01:17:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I open my eyes, I feel the dread
I feel the mists around my bed
Cold and dank, the atmosphere
Feel foreboding, feel the fear
Stench so acrid, of the dead
Thoughs of evil fill my head
Waiting for I know not who
From the mists a shadow, blue
From the shadow moves a hand
Sinewy fingers, sprinkle sand
Sand of time just trickling by
"Help me please", I start to cry
"There is no help for you this time
For I have won and you are mine
See the sand of time rush by
All run out, it's time to die"
I slowly stand, my throat so tight
I can't give in without a fight
"I don't believe you're really there"
I see it's face,it's nostrils flare
I close my eyes so very tight
I pray for sanctuary, pray for light
I hear a scream of pure outrage
My captor caught inside a cage
The cage is taken by the light
As day time slowly takes the night
Now at last I'm safe and free
The sands of time have reached the sea
Copyright ©
gwenevere
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2005-08-17 13:17:56]
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Re: Sand of Time
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by bernard2 on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 01:30:35 PM AEST
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| What a poem my own heart was caught up in the song of death. Glad it turned out ok though top marks from bernard2 |
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Re: Sand of Time
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by dagonet on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 03:32:07 PM AEST
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| umm i think wow is all i can say about this one. mindblowing. it reminds me of the lyrics to one of my fav songs. brilliant write, excellent effort. |
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