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A Fawns Miracle
Contributed by
mom11159
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Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 12:07:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It is hunting season in the mist of beauty and delight
In the thick of the trees, sounds of shooting, deer run in fright
Some grow weak from downtrodden ,are taken by man
Others desperately search for safety somewhere in their land
A little fawn tumbles in fear, mother lost to the hunters dance
Not knowing where to go, suddenly, a light from his side way glance
He stumbles up on his feet, so confused, sadden and in fear
Heads on toward the light unaware of what is near
Hope in his little heart as he runs into a horrible surprise
Headlights in his face, breaks squeal to his near demise
As he opens his heavy eyes, breathless and so unaware
Unable to move he shivers, to taillights of someone who cares
This angle who was approaching the near dead fawn
Was speaking to him with a soft voice as she put him on the lawn
She spoke to him with love and made him feel so safe
Hold on there beautiful baby I will help you find your place
He could feel his heartbeat grow week as she stroked his little head
With tears in her eyes she spoke to God, this is what she said
Lord it is my desire to save your wonderful creation
Please give him breath, heal him please, it is not his destination
Her tears fell on his face, warmth he could feel once more
His breath along with his heartbeat, strong like it was before
Strength was back in him, to his feet to did arise
He kissed the beautiful angel for she saved him from demise
He headed for the woods suddenly he veered
He turned to look again the angel disappeared
Saddened once more alone again was he
The horrifying sounds of shooting was silenced, how could this be
He entered in the woods his mother alive back on her feet
Happily he trotted to her, his heart just skipped a beat
Not only did the angel save him from something bad
But all was back to normal in his home with mom and dad!!
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mom11159
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2005-08-17 12:07:52]
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Re: A Fawns Miracle
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by bernard2 on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 12:22:22 PM AEST
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| What a lovely poem. I enjoyed reading from beggining to end alas when the hunters are about all kinds of animals have to fear and perhaps flee from the trigger happy loons that think they are doing something worthwhile. bernard2 |
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Re: A Fawns Miracle
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 04:41:10 PM AEST
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| I love this poem. As I was driving down my road to the house yesterday returning from town, there were 4 deer by the pond. I just stopped to admire them, they stood for a couple of minutes watching the care, then ran off toward the back woods. It was such a beautiful site. Hunters are not allowed on our land and are prosecuted if found. There are too many stores around here that sell meat to be killing for the fun of it. This is a fairly well to do community so it is not as if they need it to feed their families. Hunger is one thing, murder is another. Rita |
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Re: A Fawns Miracle
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 11:42:17 AM AEST
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the innocences and wamth in this poem simply touched my heart as i was reading it
this is so beautiful, kind and gentle, u have such a nice style i like reading your poetry it takes me away . . .
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Re: A Fawns Miracle
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 11:49:20 AM AEST
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i posted a comment it may not have taken so i'll post another 2 be on the safe side it's
deffinatly worth 2 comments i love your style
and reading your poems there so beautiful this one is filled with innocence and realy touched my heart as i read it, beautifuly done . . .
Ben |
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Re: A Fawns Miracle
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 08:11:57 AM AEST
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| Cathy, this is just another wonderful write from you...truly awesome when you take us on your trips (or the deer's trips) through natures serenity. What we may not agree on that all hunters are bad I'm sure we can agree that you have a truly inspirational way of writing. |
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