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Cheeseburger
Contributed by
justjames
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Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 09:31:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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i miss you
but i shouldnt
i love you
but i'm not supposed to
how can these feelings be so wrong
but be so right at the same time
i love everything about you
but i cant
and that sucks.
i sit here
and talk to you
waiting for the next time we'll see eachother
even though i hate it when we're together
i hate it more when we're appart.
you say that there's sparks
i agree that there is
sparks can turn in to something more
right?
right??
right???
we both want it to
and hate that we feel more for eachother
than we've ever felt for anyone before
but for some reason you wont let this be.
if the sparks are all i get
i'll have to accept that
but i'm gunna try and try
to turn these sparks into a flame.
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justjames
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2005-08-17 09:31:28]
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Re: Cheeseburger
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 10:00:12 AM AEST
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very sweet.. nice write
Wheres theres a spark theres a fire
Just have to be careful not to get burned
write on...Hugggggggs
~~~Michelle~~~ |
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Re: Cheeseburger
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by Darkhorse71 on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 12:53:42 PM AEST
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Hi James, this is a great write. I've been there before and I love the way you expressed and brought up the whole range of feelings. Just my opinion but getting burned is better then "what if?"
keep up the great writing dude,
Peace, john |
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