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In Darkness, I Die
Contributed by
misled_beauty
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Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 07:07:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
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In the darkness I lie,
Slumber absent from present.
I wonder: Why am I like this?
I cannot conceive of such loss,
Nor can I escape from it.
Somberlain.
Night by night, I coexist with insomnia,
Until I finally decide to begin the end of days.
The chemical caress of the pills runs rampant now.
I want to end this paranoia. End myself.
I finally start to rest; as my eyes flutter, I think,
"This is over."
Now it is quietus that lies in the shadows,
And whispers of finality that fill the room
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Re: In Darkness, I Die
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by Darkhorse71 on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 01:19:59 PM AEST
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Hi misled beauty, this is a powerful poem. I'm dorry for the sorrow and loss, I only hope this person can realize that a talent like this is a gift to be shared - not snuffed out. The last 2 lines just blew me away with their finality. Please keep up the writing!
Peace, john |
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Re: In Darkness, I Die
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by misled_beauty on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 01:07:10 AM AEST
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| Thank you and actually I wrote this in the eyes of another, my best friend. He was suffering from insomnia and told me once that he was thinking of ending it for good. So I wrote this. He is fine, he did overdose of sleeping pills but now all is well. |
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