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Lose My Mind.
Contributed by
sylviawalters
on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 04:22:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Her body is scarred,
Her beauty marred,
She's found her drug,
Never gives anyone a hug.
One thing she wants to find,
Is something within her mind,
All she wants is just one dream,
That doesn't leave her choking on a scream.
Just let her cut, have the pain,
The only thing that keeps her sane,
Don't try to stop her, or you'll find,
She'll lose something more- her mind.
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2005-08-17 04:22:40]
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Re: Lose My Mind.
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by black-bruised-n-broken on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 06:26:47 AM AEST
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| show's very good expression. |
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Re: Lose My Mind.
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by Drapes on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 07:41:31 PM AEST
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Wow, that's soo good. I don't even know what to say! It took my breath away, expecially the last stanza!
Great job!
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