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Neptune's Verse
Contributed by
wachumiri
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Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 02:59:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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A song of water fills the sky
Neptune’s voice set free
The crash of waves on distant shore
The anthem of the sea
Ares’ might, though strong as steel
With this cannot compete
For Neptune, god of ocean strength
Is Poet of the Sea
His rhyme and verse our vision sees
Our ears, what melody!
His verse, such grace! Breathtaking words
He’s written in the sea
Copyright ©
wachumiri
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2005-08-17 02:59:19]
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Re: Neptune's Verse
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 03:29:16 AM AEST
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Very beautifull write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Neptune's Verse
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by mom11159 on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 12:20:15 PM AEST
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WOW Loved this so mystical and magical so enchanting. your words so captivating you have done an excellent job with this
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Re: Neptune's Verse
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 07:27:40 PM AEST
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Ah, Neptune, what a wonderful subject. Such beauty in his world. Inspiration of sights and sounds. The feel of the mist in the air. The smell of the water. The beauty it holds underneath its evermoving surface. Your poem is a joy and great tribute to one of the most beautiful things in this world.
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Re: Neptune's Verse
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by Loende on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 08:05:00 PM AEST
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Poet indeed. The tide has drawn you in again, and again it inspires beauty. Well done, David.
Loende |
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Re: Neptune's Verse
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by Spike on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 12:33:09 AM AEST
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Solid, solid write, W. Echoes of ancient Greece in both style and references. Much enjoyed.
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Re: Neptune's Verse
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by liquidsunshine on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 11:59:14 PM AEST
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What an utterly poetic way to view the sea. I wish I weren't so afraid of water so I could enjoy such things, but I'm glad you enjoy them enough to describe the pleasures so well.
Love and peace,
Chelsea |
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Re: Neptune's Verse
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 09:42:23 PM AEST
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Not sure whether someone compared you to driftwood there...
But good work. I need to go to the sea again, drat it all. Where's a car when you need one?
You're starting to sound a bit like the neoclassicists here, especially with the exclamation points. Reminds me a bit o' Tennyson and such-like.
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Re: Neptune's Verse
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by Archie on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 10:34:32 AM AEST
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| This is quite a cool poem. I like the flow of this very much it is almost like a song. |
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Re: Neptune's Verse
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by anitajames on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 11:32:16 AM AEST
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| I love the blend of nature and mythology in this. Thank You. I enjoyed! |
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Re: Neptune's Verse
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by thumper on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 06:46:54 AM AEST
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I live in Michigan so I haven't been close to the ocean, but I do love being by the water. My biggest form of peace is just being on the lake in tune with nature. I totally enjoyed this. I can just imagine the crash of the waves and Neptune speaking of the beauty of the sea. Well done.
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Re: Neptune's Verse
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 08:42:22 PM AEST
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Such inspiring words flow from ur pen dearest David. A truly gifted poet indeed you are. One of the finest I've gotten to know. Keep up the sensational work.
*hugs*from ur fan,
Sue
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