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Prozac Trance
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 02:08:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Turned inside out
these days
can't explain the reason why
feel like I'm firing cocaine
anxiety eating me alive
Why do these thoughts plague me
I feel so angered and enraged
If only I was a book, man
I could simply
turn the page
Moments alone
can be treacherous
thoughts seem to consume
even when I try to dismiss them away
It's like they have a mind
of their own
I am afraid of who I'm becoming
so many trials I've been through
are they catching up with me?
and dammit the drugs they prescribe
only sets me free
temporarily
Carrying a heavy load
my back in a kyphotic stance
burdened by my own mind
somewhere in a Prozac trance
Laura Horner 8-17-05
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2005-08-17 02:08:30]
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Re: Prozac Trance
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 02:26:23 AM AEST
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Very good masterpeice, I mean the writing.
I've never taken prozac but I do take 200 milagrams of Zoloft when I start my day. I can relate to this write well before Zooloft.
I have no side effects, it don't make me sleepy but it does help me deal with things in a much calmer way. Thought about it a long time and finally thanked god for finally the chimical my brain needed, then thank Drs. for finally getting right. Now I say come on Zooloft.
Hang in there, my friend as many people can relate to these words than u would imagene.
luv, huggs, Zooloft, Prozac,
emy |
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Re: Prozac Trance
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 01:23:04 PM AEST
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This is a very well formulated write with powerful imagery. Even more impressive is your own personal exposure. I have been on prosac and xnax in the past; and I have battled the anxiety and depression. So you are not alone my friend. I think some of us struggle with a need to control and be in charge; and it just isn't always possible. For me there has to be a higher power upon whom I can rely.
Peace be with you my friend
Will |
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Re: Prozac Trance
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by vibes2go on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 04:06:34 PM AEST
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this whole write is brilliant .. but I love this:
If only I was a book, man
I could simply
turn the page
wish it was mine .. man!!!
mary ... (peace on sister ... lol) |
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Re: Prozac Trance
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 10:23:22 PM AEST
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| nice write |
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Re: Prozac Trance
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by Stellar on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 11:46:53 PM AEST
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Absolutely amazing poem...'trance' is probably the best word to describe it.
Sometimes I wonder how much good the drugs really do,
sometimes I think we'd all be better off without them.
Take Care,
Lizzie |
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