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A loss forgotten
Contributed by
Pray4Peace
on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 01:22:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I have lived a thousand lives
All withen my head.
Took for granted happiness
leaving everything left unsaid.
Forgot to watch the moon
As it soared above the stars.
Never knew the sun set so soon
From self imposed prison walls.
Now my hell has settled in
Thriving off my black heart.
Eating away my sanity
The only thing left to part.
Years go bye in the blink of an eye
Leaving insecurities to search for truth.
Lies steal away the sighs
of lonely forgotten dreams.
Take a look into the mirror
and Tell me what you see.
Vacent eyes holding on to
everything I can never be.
Copyright ©
Pray4Peace
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2005-08-17 01:22:15]
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Re: A loss forgotten
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by vibes2go on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 01:31:40 AM AEST
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years flew by .. and so many words went un-said.. so many things went un-done.. you're right..
mary
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Re: A loss forgotten
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by Ineedanap on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 01:50:57 AM AEST
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| Powerful. You truly display an image of a tormented soul. Great write. I absolutely loved it |
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Re: A loss forgotten
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 04:16:26 AM AEST
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A really good first submission. Aside from a few misspelled words (I'm the pot, you're the kettle), and the meter not being exact, it was really good. You created great imagery, letting us see a view from your eye.
Well done.
Take care.
David |
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Re: A loss forgotten
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 04:16:26 AM AEST
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| powerful write. Keep writing |
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Re: A loss forgotten
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by inoc on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 02:52:44 AM AEST
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I got a lot out of this write and it looks like it is your first on YPDC Oh well done!!!....congratulations Pray4Peace
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Re: A loss forgotten
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 02:48:04 AM AEST
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| very good |
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