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Dont Know What To Do
Contributed by
biznite
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Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 12:35:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I miss you so much, cant wait to see you
dont know to say, think or do when i do see you
The only thing i know is that i will smile
I dont know what to do about us and everything
Should i stop talking to you before the pain get to hard to bare
or stay and take the pain as it comes and embrace the happiness when it is there
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Re: Dont Know What To Do
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 12:46:53 AM AEST
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Embrace the happiness when it is there, my favorite line in this great write.
We have nothing to fear but fear it's self.
A masterpeice as I think we all have these thoughts-n-feelings from time to time.
huggs,
emy
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Re: Dont Know What To Do
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by Blueteelah on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 01:19:43 AM AEST
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| The poem's subject is a little cliche, but can be improved if it is carefully revised. The last line is hard to follow due to grammatical errors. Keep on writing! |
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Re: Dont Know What To Do
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by vibes2go on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 01:36:42 AM AEST
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| get out now .. I know ... |
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Re: Dont Know What To Do
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 02:02:14 AM AEST
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| The pain is always worth having just to felt that one special love even if it didn't last. Good write. |
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