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my glass heart
Contributed by
emokid
on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 11:21:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Please don’t kill me
with your pale green stare
It gets me every time
broken defenseless am I
you could send me spiraling
with one little sigh
Don’t crush me
I’m trusting you
with my fragile heart
You’re trusting me
not to break your heart
you walk a thin line
because you know where this road can lead
torment deception and heartache
you can’t wont do that again
so crash into my arms
I’ll save you
but I need you to save me too
my glass heart
hold it in your hand
don’t smash it
remember I’m weak
you have some kind of control
I’m trying to get back on my feet
I’m trusting you not to crush me
but now I don’t feel so cold and alone
with you laying on my chest I feel invincible
I wrap you up in my arms tight and never let you go
One day passes and I haven’t seen you
and somehow I feel something less
You are my light in my world
so the sun can fade, but I still live
my goddess I am not worthy
yet you say that you need me
I never seen stars in someone’s eyes
You’re special You’re what I need
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emokid
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2005-08-16 23:21:20]
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Re: my glass heart
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 11:37:23 PM AEST
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Nice write..
I must say Trust is most important to me... well it was...
Glad you found what you need..
Hold on to it!!!
Write on
~~~Michelle~~~
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Re: my glass heart
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by holderofthestone on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 11:38:25 PM AEST
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One day passes and I haven’t seen you
and somehow I feel something less
You are my light in my world
so the sun can fade, but I still live
my goddess I am not worthy
yet you say that you need me
I never seen stars in someone’s eyes
You’re special You’re what I need- wow, such beautifully felt words. i feel this exact way right now! you spelled it out perfectly! great write
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Re: my glass heart
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by Blueteelah on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 01:00:53 AM AEST
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| Enjoyed the poem, but the motif of the glass heart seems to be used to often in the poetry genre. I would have liked the poem more if it would have used a motif that was a little more fresh. |
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Re: my glass heart
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 02:21:46 AM AEST
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| I know exactly how you feel and have down to the T. Very romantic and sweet. Keep up the good work |
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Re: my glass heart
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 04:06:44 AM AEST
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so true
and swwet write. |
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