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can't understand
Contributed by
all_that_i_can_be
on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 09:58:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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the pain
the hurt
no one understands
the lines
the cuts
straight and red
against my once was smooth skin
but not anymore
now the hurt shows
the blood
masking my real pain
the pain
that they still dont see
the pain
they cant understand
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Re: can't understand
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 10:01:47 PM AEST
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| short and straight to the point. There are people out there that do understand b/c they themselves feel that exact same way. Good write |
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Re: can't understand
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by holderofthestone on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 11:46:29 PM AEST
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| nicely done here, strong words! it seems like they dont pay attention sometimes. Great write!!! A++++ |
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Re: can't understand
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by Kazzy1231 on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 04:12:32 PM AEST
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| They might not be able 2 understand but I can.Nice write. |
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