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Re: Kissing You, Sharing Me
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by holderofthestone on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 09:30:29 PM AEST
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You can fondly steal my lips
Only you and not another
No other marvel could compare to this
As we’re kissing each other.- beautiful... great great write. A++++
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Re: Kissing You, Sharing Me
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 09:48:23 PM AEST
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Very nice...I like the style you wrote this in...Full of love and passion. Well done!
Scorp. |
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Re: Kissing You, Sharing Me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 11:22:03 PM AEST
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Amazing... filled with such passion...
I Love It!!
"Oh don’t let me go
In your magnificent rapture
Your calm and defying touch
Of my soul does capture"
Keep up the awesome writting
~~~Michelle~~~
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Re: Kissing You, Sharing Me
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 01:21:29 AM AEST
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aww so swwet and passionate.
awsome write. |
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Re: Kissing You, Sharing Me
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by Stellar on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 05:17:27 PM AEST
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Yes that is an amazing feeling, and you've captured it beautifully and with so much passion!
Very nicely done!
Take care,
Lizzie |
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Re: Kissing You, Sharing Me
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 12:43:59 PM AEST
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Another poetic gem in the name of love . . .
Ben |
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Re: Kissing You, Sharing Me
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by 68birdls1 on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 07:03:28 PM AEST
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| you write with such great description! i can actually imagine this! i love your passion, please dont ever stop writing... |
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Re: Kissing You, Sharing Me
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 11:13:57 PM AEST
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....speechless...
passion and lust is something this
write will engrave against this site, but forevermore...
I'm without words Rach..
Phew...
Yours-
B |
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Re: Kissing You, Sharing Me
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by Pyrochick on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 11:31:38 PM AEST
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| WOW. just wow. that was amazing, the best thing i've read in a long time. its was great. love the style to. |
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Re: Kissing You, Sharing Me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 01:20:37 AM AEST
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| you had a couple of really nice lines in there. but you lost me with the virtuous essence and untainted body. innocense does not belong in a poem like this. |
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Re: Kissing You, Sharing Me
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th January 2006 @ 08:37:17 PM AEST
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| two very much in love... recalling my wedding night, how wonderful his kiss, and I was scared to death lol. Love your passionate poem.. RL |
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Re: Kissing You, Sharing Me
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 26th January 2007 @ 08:39:19 AM AEST
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Amazing.... This was really beautiful... It makes me want to go and kiss my boyfriend... hehehe... Beautifully written
Take care
Christina |
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