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City Streets
Contributed by
Vermillion
on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 05:50:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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city streets
im walking down the city streets
watching the stars and catching a breeze
soaking up the moon light,on this flawless city night
the breeze is cold,just like my soul,and just out of sight
theres a woman at the bus stop
she lowers her head and looks at her watch
the pendulum swings,the hour glass breaks,the ticking of the clock
walking these streets alone,pavement and simple stone
the chill in the air,im not really there,and cold to the bone...
theres a child gazing at me
catching the chill in my breeze
and the whispers of the flowing autumn leaves
time ticks by,the old woman sighs
and i just dont feel right...
theres blood in these city streets
chills in their bones and fear so deep
and i just dont feel right....
the hounds can smell their fear
when the sun comes i shall disappear
completely out of sight...
its such a perfect night
down these city streets and neon lights
and now it just feels right...
im walking down the city streets
watching the stars and catching a breeze
reminiscing on my past demise
tonight is just like the day i died
and i just dont feel right...
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Vermillion
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2005-08-16 17:50:27]
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Re: City Streets
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by Overstated on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 06:09:14 PM AEST
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a chilling and powerful write. with lines like 'theres blood in these city streets
chills in their bones and fear so deep' some really great lines lye beneath your words
feel free to comment on my work also at: http://www.your-poetry.com/modules.php?name=Your_Account&op=userinfo&username=overstated |
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Re: City Streets
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by cutestmofo on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 07:06:33 PM AEST
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| i'm not goin to pretend i am a great poet but i'll just say it was amazin i'm only 15 but i still am able to notice something of such amazin quality keep up the good work and if u want check my poetry out |
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Re: City Streets
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by Demonic_Depression_7625 on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 10:26:22 PM AEST
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| i really enjoyed your poem. it was a very good write :) |
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Re: City Streets
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by assassinatorgirl on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 09:57:32 PM AEST
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| absolutely beautiful |
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