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Remember To Breathe
Contributed by
Beckett0306
on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 02:26:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Silos in the distance
The sun is setting down
Over a ran shakled barn
as this old train moves out of town.
Sitting in this seat
Looking out this window
Thought of confusion
In my head begin to grow.
My future? My life?
I smile.... I cry.
I have so many dreams
But not enough stars in the sky.
LIke a kid waiting for Christmas
I cant wait to grow up.
But it's in this life
That I am stuck.
So like the farmers of summer
You dont know what the future will bring
Wheather it be Rain or Drought
All you can do is keep your head up
Remember to breahe,
And be ready for anything.
Copyright ©
Beckett0306
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2005-08-16 14:26:41]
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Re: Remember To Breathe
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by worldsenigma on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 04:25:20 PM AEST
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this has a good meaning to it
i noticed u kinda went for the easy rhymes tho
those do nothing but hold u back (trust me i do the same thing) i like it tho
nice message :) |
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Re: Remember To Breathe
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by Stellar on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 05:41:36 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this. I don't know about the easy rhymes, as long as your message is conveyed and I think you did a nice job with that.
Take care,
Liz |
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