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Gate Way to Hell
Contributed by
lillyjane
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Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 12:48:04 PM in AEST
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Your mind is to closed,you cant even tell,
your crossing the boundry, to the gate way to hell,
mytholic, historic, picked up by high sound,
from the nutrition of placenta, to the dust in the ground,
Undernourish your soul, from the the good of mankind,
cut of from your God, and the rules that he binds,
The truth is decaying, growing a skin of lies,
if you keep on praying, I will materialize,
The book of revelation, is something we cant disguise,
I look into your face, and see your soul burning in your eyes
majestic, materialistic, you can never be free,
when you leave this place, your coming with me.
Copyright ©
lillyjane
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2005-08-16 12:48:04]
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Re: Gate Way to Hell
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 12:52:23 PM AEST
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| well tell your son he did an awsome job on this.his very talented. |
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Re: Gate Way to Hell
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 12:58:12 PM AEST
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Good job...lots of talent here....
Jenni |
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Re: Gate Way to Hell
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by bernard2 on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 01:13:22 PM AEST
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| Lilyjane you must be very proud of your son he shows a real gift for poetry. May his pen never leave his hand regards from bernard2 |
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Re: Gate Way to Hell
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by Darkhorse71 on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 01:45:46 PM AEST
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"from the nutrition of placenta, to the dust in the ground," - May he write the entire time. He has a talent in writing that I hope he pursues lillyjane.
peace, john
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Re: Gate Way to Hell
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by ChromePlatedHrt on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 01:53:19 PM AEST
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| That is an incredible write. Your son is extremely talented. Please tell him to never give up his writing, it is truly wonderful. |
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Re: Gate Way to Hell
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by Manda2 on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 04:02:29 PM AEST
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I'm glad you put this poem on lillyjane, it's creepy. Tell your son to get writing again!! He has an audience that awaits him!
xxx |
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Re: Gate Way to Hell
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 06:50:21 PM AEST
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Well, I can see that talent certainly runs deep in your family. Get him to sign up for his own account. He is one talented poet.
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: Gate Way to Hell
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by Stellar on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 05:25:21 PM AEST
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I'm going to sound like a broken record here, but your son is truly talented.
Hopefully it's a gift he never gives up.
Lizzie |
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