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Crimson River of regret
Contributed by
What_Hurts_The_Most
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Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 10:44:46 AM in AEST
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You don’t know what its like to be me,
Waking up every morning and hating what you’ve become,
Subjected to the pain of losing who you thought was the one,
Feeling this emptiness inside you,
Not knowing why you do what you do,
And the only person who can stop it,
Is the person who pushes you away,
Hurting yourself to numb the pain you’ve kept inside too long,
Not knowing what you’ve done to make this turn out so wrong,
Wanting to move on, but he’s always on your mind,
Wanting to get over the person who you thought you’d left behind,
And you don’t know what its like,
With the knife held in your hand,
Wanting someone to listen,
But they’re too scared to understand,
Wanting someone to hold your hand,
As you sit and cry,
Someone who’ll see past your smile,
And your pack of lies,
And I want someone to realise,
That since the day that we first met,
You’re the only one who’ll ever stop,
The crimson river of regret,
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Re: Crimson River of regret
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by ruthie1983 on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 10:58:32 AM AEST
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| I like this poetry cuz it expresses emotion within. I am going through similar experience, so keep ur shoulder up. |
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Re: Crimson River of regret
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by JenJen on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 11:01:16 AM AEST
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This is a very emotional write, you have gone into great depth of how he/she feels. Keep up the great writing
Love and hugges
Jenny
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Re: Crimson River of regret
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by Darkhorse71 on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 11:17:43 AM AEST
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A haunting, gut-wrenching, intense emotional work. You did an outstanding job with this. I'll be wringing out tears from my heart for the rest of the day.
Peace and gentle hugs,
john |
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Re: Crimson River of regret
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by Mangs on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 12:07:41 PM AEST
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I feel the pain in this......moving....
Umang. |
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Re: Crimson River of regret
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 09:04:42 PM AEST
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| has the mix of dark and love in it. I think a lot of people can relate to this. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Crimson River of regret
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by gery_giggles on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 10:15:40 AM AEST
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powerful write, i can feel the pain in every word.
luv |
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