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looking for a friend
Contributed by
holderofthestone
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Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 12:14:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Sometimes when we look we see
Nothings what it seems to be
There are times we pass it by
And other times we stop and try
To take things inside a soul
And heed the heart and mind as whole
Sometimes we can see the tears
Other times just pain and fears
So in your dark times look around
And right beside you I'll be found
sometimes if you take the time
there will a friend you find
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Re: looking for a friend
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by girish on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 12:23:55 AM AEST
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dear friend,
nice piece. i like it. read my poem on friendship in the 1st page. it conveys the same. take my friendship i take yours. saty tuned.
girish/
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Re: looking for a friend
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by wikedladi on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 01:13:02 AM AEST
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| Nicely written : ) |
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Re: looking for a friend
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 02:01:53 AM AEST
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| Very good poem, nice write. SLipSiX. |
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Re: looking for a friend
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 02:06:08 AM AEST
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| wonderfully written. Somebody is special to have a friend like you to have in their darkest hour. |
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Re: looking for a friend
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 04:09:15 AM AEST
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well written .
great job on this one. |
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Re: looking for a friend
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by brew on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 11:28:29 PM AEST
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Yes a friend, that needs to be a friend back. Short and very good write.
Brew~ |
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Re: looking for a friend
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by Sinned on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 06:43:32 AM AEST
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In time of need
Dark times feed
Worry scared
God our plead
In you a friend
I take heed
A true friend indeed
Thank you for this lovely poem.
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