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Insightive Words
Contributed by
midian
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Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 12:01:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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No soul No emotion,
No emotion No pain,
No pain No heartache,
No heartache No gain,
Every scar teaches something,
Every tear tells a tale,
Every second makes us stronger,
We succeed where we failed,
Turn a new page,
Find a new path,
Walk a new road,
Never look back,
Take something different everywhere you go,
But never carry a load on your shoulder bearing down on your soul ,
Be free Have fun,
But always be aware,
Theres always someone wiser than you,
To give you help and Be there.
Copyright ©
midian
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2005-08-16 00:01:33]
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Re: Insightive Words
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 01:36:25 AM AEST
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Very insightful words, indeed. The voice of experience definitely backs this piece.
Vaguely I feel that there may be too much repeitition in the styling, at the beginning at least. Also "insightive" isn't quite correct. But this is just my nitpicking. Congratulations on the new inspiration.
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Re: Insightive Words
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th August 2006 @ 08:37:04 AM AEST
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A chord of harmonious structure we seem 2 have found on the same instrument. this is lovely and you a are good writter, a noticable style, and idellable subject matter you write about. An abundance of wisdom is quite apparent here.
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Ben |
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