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Naked Coco Pops
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 07:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Signatures By
The Tired Lion
Warm yourself by the fire
Have a drink from the well,
So, you think that you're lost
Welcome to my feverish hell..
~*~
Screams the eclipse of the sun
Oh, butterflies to surely blame,
Blackest Dragons on the run
Windy creatures in the flames.
~*~
Voices of living tree trunks
My mind wood deep within',
Candle flames plzstop moving
Snowflakes now are bloomin'.
~*~
Distant graveyard on the hill
Blackberry groves now bare,
If my mind was not delutional
Would be with you not in here.
Copyright ©
ladyfawn
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2003-01-14 07:40:00]
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Re: Naked Coco Pops
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 08:46:01 AM AEST
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i loved this one girl ...thanks for sharing
Shari |
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Re: Naked Coco Pops
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by roisin on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 10:00:30 AM AEST
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words, words, words, they become such an addiction...i, as you, feel the need and the desire to write...it is a constant in my life...great visual write, enjoyed reading it..
ta... rosie....and i do hope you are better soon....ginger tea always so soothing when i'm down with a bug..... |
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Re: Naked Coco Pops
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by spooky on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 06:36:44 PM AEST
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| well written,,your friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: Naked Coco Pops
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 06:40:46 PM AEST
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| Nice... interesting title too... :D |
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Re: Naked Coco Pops
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by princesspurty on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 08:44:06 PM AEST
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| ease up girl, it will all be clear in a day or too, hope your better soon, great poem, get some rest and plenty of soup! luvs ya! |
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Re: Naked Coco Pops
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by venkat on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 01:50:20 AM AEST
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| Delutional !!! ahhhha..very good write..your venkat |
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Re: Naked Coco Pops
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by wolfflow on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 11:41:23 AM AEST
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| undressed breakfast cereals, snappy and crackling, weird thoughts apoppin, time for more vitties dearie |
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Re: Naked Coco Pops
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by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 01:32:01 AM AEST
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| I loved this ..reminds me of an abstract painting... :) Fevers gone now but staring at screen disease still lingers huh? lmao. ;) loves ya.. |
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Re: Naked Coco Pops
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 10:55:00 PM AEST
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| WOWIE!!!!!!! Nessa, this was an excellent read. One of these days, I'll be able to write something like this. *S* cynthia |
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