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The Cave
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 11:23:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Receding to the cave
things aren't going well today
feel I need a place to hide
from me
All is quiet there
in the cave
leave a small hole to breathe
a peep hole to see
They know to leave me be
in the cave
Let me rest
Let me repent
Let me resent
myself
for needing
the cave
I have stayed there for days
days long ago
darkened curtains over the window
blanket on my head
in the cave
It has been my protector
from harsh lightening storms
it has relieved the cold chill of bones
kept me safe and warm
Call me crazy
yeah, I know
least I have my cave, man
got my safe place to go
Laura Horner 8-15-05
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Re: The Cave
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by vibes2go on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 11:32:25 PM AEST
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| yeah, I know .. good they took my right to have a gun away from me.. lol. I asked my doc today .. can't a person get mad any more without being labled??? Good grief ... but I guess the deal is .. from high to low .. poor you . . poor me .. poor us... ((((((((((((((((((( my hippienurse)))))))))))))))) |
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Re: The Cave
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 12:01:02 AM AEST
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such raw and honest words..........
I can very much relate......some people need somewhere to retreat to in this cold and harsh world.....even if that place is imaginery....
i liked your conveyence of this illness....chilling and touching.. |
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Re: The Cave
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by Ravensfire on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 01:11:31 AM AEST
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| Laura each time I read your, words, poetry, I am brought back in time to my own experiences, good and bad. You amaze me with the way you express emotions. My ex is bipolar, severe depression, was a very tough time in my life. T.Y. |
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Re: The Cave
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 04:02:55 AM AEST
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I think we all have our caves.
good work.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: The Cave
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 10:15:32 AM AEST
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We all have a refuge your poetry is mine at times lovely poem here 4u always sister laura, friendship's cave of artistic sustinance.
Ben |
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Re: The Cave
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 06:48:51 PM AEST
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This is a very honest, soul-bearing write Laura...I like the way you laid out your emotions in such a straight-forward fashion. Very well done, and I think we all need our cave once in awhile: )
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Re: The Cave
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by secretwind on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 01:11:15 AM AEST
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THIS FLOW IS SO EXCELLENT
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