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The one who makes me cry
Contributed by
MysticFireFairy
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Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 09:39:48 PM in AEST
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i look into your eyes,
i say goodbye for the last time.
never again will i have to see you,
never again will i wish that youd love me too.
b/c now all of that is gone,
but i was never able to move on.
instead ive decided just to give up on it all,
youll never again have to see me fall.
you never even cared about me,
so its not gonna hurt you to watch me leave.
i only wish it would tear you apart,
then maybe id get back my heart.
whats been yours for so long,
will finally return to the one it belongs.
my heart started out as mine,
but then i gave it up with time.
i gave it to you,
w/o thinking that in the end id be screwed.
youve left me here alone forever,
never wanting us to be together.
i know its true so please dont lie,
i see the truth in your eyes.
i know you never want to see me again,
i know you want everything between us to end.
its not that hard to see that everything we once had is gone,
but i still just cant move on!
remembering everything we used to do,
makes me wish even more for you.
why wont you come back to me?
it hurts me more than anything.
youre everything that makes me cry,
everything that makes me wanna die.
and yet youre what brings happiness into my soul,
until the day death takes its toll.
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MysticFireFairy
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2005-08-15 21:39:48]
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Re: The one who makes me cry
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 09:48:56 PM AEST
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| Great write keep it up. |
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Re: The one who makes me cry
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by Darkhorse71 on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 11:19:15 PM AEST
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| Awful heartwrenching, good writing. Keep it up |
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Re: The one who makes me cry
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 11:54:07 PM AEST
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Very Powerful write felt your words..
When someone you Love so dearly walks out you have to wonder if they even knew you at all.
If you look in to the eyes of the one you love and you see nothing...Leaving is for the best..
For a heart with so much love to give deserves better....Wish you Happiness to come..
~~~Michelle~~~
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Re: The one who makes me cry
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by ruthie1983 on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 04:44:48 PM AEST
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| Good writing. i feel ur pain cuz went through similar experience. Well emotion expressed. |
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