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i hate my life
Contributed by
Littleshadow
on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 07:49:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I hate my life
Torn to pieces,
Things happen,
That i don’t like,
I hate them,
Just trying to live a life,
A life of misery
Trying to fix my life
People say things will be alright,
But there not.
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Littleshadow
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2005-08-15 19:49:21]
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Re: i hate my life
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by valichka on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 08:24:23 PM AEST
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| just believe that your life will be better, and it will. And once you give your life to God your life will change!!! Believe me I know :) May God Bless You:) |
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Re: i hate my life
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by BlackFire9786 on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 01:25:30 AM AEST
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yea life sucks a lot....but there are sooo many changes and twists and turns in life, it can't suck forever....if ya ever wanna talk, that's what ppl at ypdc are for....anyway, i like the poem, especially the last line, it makes it seem....final i guess, for lack of a better word....i dunno great job anyway
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