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In her eyes

Contributed by Jen54 on Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 04:17:42 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

In her eyes
you can see her joy
In her eyes
you can see her happiness
In her eyes
you can see her hopes
In her eyes
you can see her dreams
In her eyes
you can see her fears
In her eyes
you can see her sleepless nights
In her eyes
you can see her pleading for you to help her

Copyright © Jen54 ... [ 2005-08-15 16:17:42]
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Re: In her eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 12:18:52 PM AEST
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And in her eyes I hope that she sees there is always at least one person, if not quite a few that will be willing to help. A very good write. Keep it up. You write very well.

Re: In her eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 01:26:48 AM AEST
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I like how the flow sped up with each line, and the repeated line worked too. Nicely done, and keep writing through your pain...it helps! Take Care...

Scorp.

Re: In her eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 03:38:10 AM AEST
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Short and sweet. I liked this piece of yours. Chin up.

Re: In her eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by emphaticplacebo on Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 07:57:54 AM AEST
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Jen, you have achieved once again in this poem. You make the reader see your point of view with good flow and great syntax.
Keep up the good work!

Dan

Re: In her eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Tiffyo4 on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 07:50:22 PM AEST
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very sad but i liked it alot
Tiff

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