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Take a Look
Contributed by
sheaa
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Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 02:46:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Take a look at me now
Tell me what you see
Oh, but you can imagine how
I am the way I am
You molded me together
Made me this way
Feelings light as feathers
Falling from the sky on a cloudy day
I don't feel
I don't care
My god, it's so real
And yet, I'm not really there
You see what you want to see
You don't see the truth
You don't see me
You're looking right through
So congratulations to you
For ******* it up so beautifully
Now look me in the eye and tell me truthfully..
What it is that makes you twist
Makes you want to use your fist
To fight away the things I say
Just to hurt you..for hurting me in so many ways
Disappointment..it's nothing new
Regret..Not something I haven't been through
So take a look at me now
And tell me what you see
But your not really looking are you?
No, you're looking right through.
x/3
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sheaa
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Re: Take a Look
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by lostrelic on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 02:50:27 PM AEST
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| cool write kinda diffrent but in a good way keep up the great write |
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Re: Take a Look
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by Stellar on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 03:02:17 PM AEST
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"My god, it's so real
And yet, I'm not really there"
That line was great! a blunt and brutally honest write, the best kind. Nicely done.
Take care,
Liz |
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Re: Take a Look
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 05:59:34 AM AEST
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| awesome poem, well done |
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