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walking on broken words
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 02:43:45 PM in AEST
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as the sky turns red and the glow of the moon peaks as one
the heavens lay open and light from the midnight sun
my journey will have begun
im escaping my city and my window view
to see the world as one should do
visiting the people watching the scene
trying to find the canadian dream
seeing the homeless the sick and the poor
writing a novel about how the government closes the door
sick of society walking away
no one caring that children are dying today
only themselves do they only hear
not the peoples true fear
health care, starvation ,this we should help
or that the world is losing all doubt
in our leaders and our kings to them its all greed
never caring what society needs
so off on the road i leave wednesday
showing the world what games we play
alone on my quest to wake up this place
showing the world its true face
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2005-08-15 14:43:45]
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Re: walking on broken words
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by Sheaa on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 02:49:21 PM AEST
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Well..thanks for writing TRUTH. Hopefully people will read this and feel something..maybe even make a change. You have talent. You use it wisely. I applaud you.
Thanks =]
with love,
..sheaa ♥ |
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Re: walking on broken words
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by Stellar on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 02:58:12 PM AEST
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Great depiction of the world we live in. Sad, but very much our reality. Thank you for writing such an eye opening piece. We can only hope that a large number of people end up reading it.
Keep up the great writes and take care!
Liz |
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Re: walking on broken words
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 03:48:49 PM AEST
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| Great write. I agree. Peace to you on your quest, Laura |
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Re: walking on broken words
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 09:37:54 PM AEST
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| nice write and good luck on you starting to change things for the better. |
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Re: walking on broken words
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 10:58:23 PM AEST
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Sad but unfortunatly true.
Hang tuff and keep up the good work.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: walking on broken words
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by breny on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 02:20:47 PM AEST
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Your words are full of truth and meaning and that is why I love this write.
The rhyme scheme is also good and it makes this poem flow nicely!
Excellent Write!
~Brenna~ |
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