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Mountain Hike
Contributed by
mom11159
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Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 02:40:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The view is overwhelming, such beauty, while so meek
Through the trees I perceive astounding snow capped peaks
The different levels of wonder, gloriously grand
Seeing the spectacular Mountain, proudly as it stands
Tall tress all around, fresh pine I smell
A deep breath I take, peace within me dwells
Pondering which way to continue natures hike
To reach the pointed summit, the Mountains delight
Continuing my climb over rocky terrain
Air getting thinner, more excitement I gain
Soaring all around, high in the cloudy sky
An eagle spreads his wings, while echoing his cry
Howling is heard, a proud grey wolf appears
Glaring eyes upon my own, I shiver as he nears
Frozen in place he walks past, eyes still a glare
He disappears into the trees, as he growls me a dare
My journey continues as I come closer to the top
So beautiful and breathless I surely had to stop
I sat upon a log to gaze at a beautiful fawn
Drinking from a crystal lake, playing on natures lawn
Finally, top of the mountain, I have reached my destination
Relaxed as I view Gods’ beautiful creations
I lay back, close my eyes, in my peaceful serene place
Where nature calms your heart, God will touch your face!
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Re: Mountain Hike
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by lostrelic on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 02:47:36 PM AEST
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| great poem very visual i am also going for a two year hike i will try to remember it on my walk |
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Re: Mountain Hike
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 02:58:55 PM AEST
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| I could feel myself on the mountain with you as I read, the smell, the sights, beatifully described. Very well written |
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Re: Mountain Hike
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 05:47:19 PM AEST
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What a beautiful poem this is i loved reading it, so vivid a stye you have i feel like i'm right there . . .
Ben
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Re: Mountain Hike
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by Sagess on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 06:48:12 PM AEST
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I love hiking and backpacking, but since having children we haven't been able to go. This poem makes me miss it even more!! Although, we are taking our twin 3-year-old boys on a little trip in the second week of September...maybe they'll get to see all the wildlife described in this poem.
Thanks for sharing! Beautiful imagery. |
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Re: Mountain Hike
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 07:56:26 AM AEST
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| And again, with your great knack of wonderful imagery, you have taken me on another trip with you through nature's serenity like I was really there...I felt this adventure. Just totally awesome. Once again, thank you. :) |
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