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Chelsie's Song
Contributed by
fromhopes2hopeless
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Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 01:03:11 PM in AEST
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To hear the music of the angels is a blessing,
but to hear your voice in my head is so much more.
You sing me your song of trust and faith, and love and happiness.
All these things never made so much sense
As the past four seasons have shown
Look at us then, and again now that we've grown
I can look in the mirror, be proud and smile
A smile I haven't seen in a while.
Because you sang me your song.
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fromhopes2hopeless
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2005-08-15 13:03:11]
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Re: Chelsie's Song
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by juliette on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 06:52:48 PM AEST
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I think this is such a sweet and kindred write and I don't know why more people don't read it!!!!!!!!
Thanks for sharing!
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Re: Chelsie's Song
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by PoeticHybrid on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 06:46:59 AM AEST
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| I like the over all messsage, but the flow seems a bit odd to me. There were a few places that I stumbled while reading. Try making the stanzas a more unifom length and I think it will help a lot. |
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Re: Chelsie's Song
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by Somnium on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 04:14:07 PM AEST
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Beautiful, i know the feeling
Ben
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