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Consequences
Contributed by
ruthie1983
on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 03:04:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Have you ever hated yourself?
For the darkness behind your doings?
Wishing for a time machine,
Only sorrow sorrounds you,
Your past hunts your mind,
You realize you were so stupid,
For the things you did,
Why did i do what i did?
You want to rewind time,
Wishing you could replay that day,
Wishing God, Jehovah could hear your prayer,
No one understands,
No one could save you,
Now its time to reap the seed,
The bad starts happenning,
Because of the past mistake,
You want to blame others,
But its your own doings,
You could have said No!
You created your own consequences.
Copyright ©
ruthie1983
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2005-08-15 03:04:59]
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Re: Consequences
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by wikedladi on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 03:50:35 AM AEST
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Very nice write! most ppl do blame their mistakes on others and then continue to repeat the cycle... But mistakes are something to learn from if u can recongize you've made them.
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Re: Consequences
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by emystar on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 04:47:22 AM AEST
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Sad but unfotunatly true. Once a person stands and takes responsibility for their mistakes then change comes.
Good work.
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Re: Consequences
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by Zandria on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 07:21:05 AM AEST
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Every...Single...Day...
Thank you so very much for sharing.
Good write. |
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