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Why Do I Love You?
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 10:07:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Why is it that for you I feel love?
Was I attacked by love’s stupid dove?
Why is it you that I care for so much?
Even though we totally lost touch?
Why do I love someone I totally hate?
What does it mean? That this is my fate?
All I feel is hate and anger towards you
Yet, think about you is all I can do
Has someone attached a string from you to me?
Why is it when I close my eyes, it’s you I see?
Am I supposed to hate and love you?
And is think about you all I am to do?
How come whenever I see you I feel love and hate?
Why is it the person I hate the one I want to date?
All I feel is hate and anger towards you
Yet, think about you is all I can do
Why is it when I see you I want you to leave?
Why do I want you to walk away from me?
Yet, while walk away, I want you to stay?
And why do I want you with me everyday?
And why is it when I see you my heart pounds
With love, but fills with hate when you’re around?
Why is think about you all I can do?
Why in hell and on earth do I love you?
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Re: Why Do I Love You?
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by holderofthestone on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 10:12:46 PM AEST
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nice! i really like this its strong
"Why is it when I see you I want you to leave?
Why do I want you to walk away from me?
Yet, while walk away, I want you to stay?
And why do I want you with me everyday?
And why is it when I see you my heart pounds
With love, but fills with hate when you’re around?"-- my favorite part. show alot of unaswered questions. i feel ya. great job. |
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Re: Why Do I Love You?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 10:20:52 PM AEST
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Applause.. very Good writing..
I can relate to this so much..
Thoses words are what we sometimes want to say but are afarid of the outcome or is that just me lol...
Really Perfect write for me... ty 4 sharin
Hugggggggggs
~~~Michelle~~~ |
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Re: Why Do I Love You?
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by Stellar on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 10:39:11 PM AEST
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I have to agree with holderofthestone...that is a very powerful and well written verse.
Nicely done.
Liz |
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Re: Why Do I Love You?
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by vibes2go on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 11:05:03 PM AEST
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| great job... more more... |
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Re: Why Do I Love You?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 11:48:00 PM AEST
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| great write keep it up |
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Re: Why Do I Love You?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 11:48:26 PM AEST
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| great write keep it up |
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Re: Why Do I Love You?
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by brokenwings on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 11:55:24 PM AEST
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love can be that confusing, i understand your feelings. good write..
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Re: Why Do I Love You?
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 12:08:52 PM AEST
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Yep! Sounds like good ol' confusing love to me Sprints! Welcome to Hell : )
Very good emotive piece expressing the conflicting nature of love and the emotional upheaval that comes with the territory...Good job!
Scorp. |
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Re: Why Do I Love You?
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by Jaycee on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 09:21:15 AM AEST
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| Really cool write. It also comes across as powerful rock lyrics (do you play/perform?) Yeah, it's more a poem of anger and rage than love. Definitely one of your best writes, coursing with emotion and energy. Impressive write, concept and outpouring. ~sprints... definitely a 5-starrer. |
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Re: Why Do I Love You?
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by Bones on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 07:27:59 PM AEST
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You present your state of confusion very well. I really love this one. It's different from your others in a way...but hey, it's always good to try new things. Keep rollin! Peace!
-Agent Bones |
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