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A Silent Noise.
Contributed by
lillyjane
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Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 07:22:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Can you hear the silence, it is all around,
if you really listen, you can hear a sound,
when your all alone, and you think, there is nothing,
if you really listen, you can hear the silence humming,
You cant see the silence, so you think that its not there,
its another of natures invisibles, like the wind and the fresh air
if you really listen, if you really want to hear,
you can hear the world, is whispering, softly in your ear,
do not be lonley, its saying, silently,
you are a child of the universe, you are a part of me.
Copyright ©
lillyjane
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2005-08-14 19:22:36]
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Re: A Silent Noise.
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by holderofthestone on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 07:38:37 PM AEST
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| makes one think... good write, intriuging thoughts. |
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Re: A Silent Noise.
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by Darkhorse71 on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 09:06:35 PM AEST
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| I like that. It is a very comforting poem. |
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Re: A Silent Noise.
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 10:12:30 PM AEST
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Silence can sometimes be absolutely deafening. This is a great post. Yes, we are all children of the universe.
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Re: A Silent Noise.
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by mom11159 on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 11:32:32 PM AEST
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I hear the silence every time i am one with nature but then again i hear nature sing to me. Excellent and peaceful poem a delight to read
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Re: A Silent Noise.
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 03:02:45 AM AEST
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| Another quality poem by lillyjane, well done. xxxxx |
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Re: A Silent Noise.
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by Manda2 on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 04:07:54 PM AEST
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| Sometimes it's nice to just listen to the silence. Your poem is a very soft, comforting poem and I love it. Well done lillyjane! |
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