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BYE
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PolarBear
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Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 11:39:40 AM in AEST
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what ever happened to us we were perfect you and I if we held it together we would not say bye. I wish you would at least say hi but all we do is talk and lie. As my life just passes me bye I look at you and wish I could die. I love you so but I can not denie that your fellings are diffrent then mine. Every night I cry and cry as I sye and say goodbye.
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Re: BYE
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 02:29:55 PM AEST
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Dear Polar Bear!
Do not cry, but wait for the winter and join the Cooney Island Poilar Bears with the Ring-Around-The Rosie!
Am I ever glad I clicked on Polar Bear!
We all love the Water Doln't we?
If you click on the link below you will see the Lord walking on the water.
HE too loves Polar Bears.
.http://www.your-poetry.com/modules.php?name=News&file=article&sid=103237
Click on it and you will see Him.
I am so glad our ways have crossed dear Polar Bear
Your friend
Elizabeth
Polar Bear. |
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Re: BYE
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 02:38:45 PM AEST
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Oh you are hard to get to.
I posted a comment and it disappeared.
So I sent you a message.
Which reads as follows"
Dear Polar Bear.
I just posted a comment on your site, but it did not come up.
Have to try again later on.
I am too a Polar Bear.
If you click the link below here you will see the Lord Walkig on the WaterHe too loves Polar Bears.
I am a Cooney Island Polar Bear. Click this link below. and greet the Lord as He walks the Sea. and say "Hello" WITH A LITTLE COMMENT.
Cheers
Elizabeth
Polar Bear from Coney Island
Di not be sad about the Good Bye, you will meet plenty of new friends in Winter when the Polar Bears dance the Ring-Around-the-Rosie
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Re: BYE
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by Urizen on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 02:48:22 PM AEST
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| I liked this poem, I liked the way it's written as a kind of sprawling narrative, fits the poem well, well done, thanks for sharing it |
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Re: BYE
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 02:50:18 PM AEST
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| A very good poem, I can relate to this, I think I can anyway, I had a girlfriend I dated for six months, she said she did not cheat on the ones she love, but instead she lied to me our whole relationship, and cheated on me. I was hurt, but now I have put that behind me and I am happy. I think I have finally found love with a girl named Colleen. A very good write from you. SLipSiX. By the way I like Polar bears, they are beautiful, haha. |
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Re: BYE
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by PolarBear on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 03:16:39 PM AEST
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| Yoh your poem is the best poem I have ever read I laughed I cried I did the hookey pookey it was great I am going to show it to all my freinds of I will tell them that you wrote it man please write more. |
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Re: BYE
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by movax on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 12:27:11 PM AEST
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| Great poem about a break-up. Hope it's cathartic |
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