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Sould
Contributed by
AssassinatorGirl
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Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 01:35:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I beg of you, you my sweetest friend.
Tell me everything about who I am.
I lost my soul when I sold it to some guy.
I thought he was kidding when he said I'd never die.
But now I'm hopelessly endlessly lost,
And truly have I paid his cost.
I can't see but blackness and terrifying shapes.
There's nothing that can save my blindness and hates.
I feel so corrupted and full of regret.
My kindness has seeped into fields of upset.
All I can hear is the screams of the victims.
Nothing I do can stop me to hit them.
I'm afraid and so hateful.
I'm scared of myself though.
My friends keep on dying.
My family's crying.
But I sit and watch.
And stifle a laugh.
They can call me a traitor, a liar, a fiend.
I know what I am, that does not go unseen.
My senses are dulled and I cannot relax.
I just sent my mother a cake full of tacks.
I have not control, I feel so unreal.
Everything living just cannot be real.
I'll test it, and see that those thoughts are extreme.
No one could live if there's someone like me.
I made my house out of blood.
Rather than sticks and mud.
It tasted better, I could not breathe.
And for a second it felt serene.
Copyright ©
AssassinatorGirl
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2005-08-14 01:35:15]
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Re: Sould
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by Ineedanap on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 01:41:55 AM AEST
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| Dark, frightening. Great write! Kinda reminds me of helter skelter, is that at what is was about? Probly not. ANyways, great write |
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Re: Sould
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by clowns_can_burn on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 02:44:37 AM AEST
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wow
this is a dark write
I love it tho, I like how I can understand it and relate it to me
its really good |
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