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Heart- Beating- Goal- Repeating
Contributed by
EJXC-05
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Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 01:33:18 AM in AEST
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Running with all you have to give
Still being challenged by the person beside you
Running so hard that you can see your breath in the
midst of everything
Running so hard that you feel your heart coming out
of your chest, feeling the oxygen seeping out of your pores
Everything is going so fast that the brain can't think or feel
that your body is about to give into death and your body
can't stop holding on to wanting to win
Everything you think you feel is really not there to begin
with, so you ask God to let you do your best
To run so fast that you are flying like a cloud in the sky
But instead you are left down on the rubber floor in front
of everybody looking at you like you have just failed
When you fall on the floor, you tell yourself that all
of your dreams and goals, you had for yourself, have just
gone by like the girl that passed you and had won the race
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Re: Heart- Beating- Goal- Repeating
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by EJXC-05 on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 01:43:24 AM AEST
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| very good |
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Re: Heart- Beating- Goal- Repeating
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by Somnium on
Saturday, 6th May 2006 @ 05:58:23 AM AEST
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| NICE |
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Re: Heart- Beating- Goal- Repeating
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by ElliotRS on
Sunday, 7th May 2006 @ 12:11:53 PM AEST
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| very well written...It explains how running goes mental not physical when you think your about to fall to the ground. Nice job! |
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Re: Heart- Beating- Goal- Repeating
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by EJXC-05 on
Wednesday, 5th December 2007 @ 08:57:10 AM AEST
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| very good woman |
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