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insane
Contributed by
all_that_i_can_be
on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 10:47:39 PM in AEST
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i want to scream
i want to cry
all these feelings
numbing me
sometimes
i think im insane
so caught up in my own thougts
that nothing else matters
but the only thing i want is to escape
escape my feelings
escape the hurt
escape myself
i think im insane
how can i smile
and still feel this pain
put on a mask
its so easy to pretend
but no amount of pretend
can mask the feelings inside
sometimes i feel
how can i not be insane?
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Re: insane
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 10:56:57 PM AEST
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awww....it's a good and sad write. and i know a lot of people feel like this. i'm included in those people. it seems easier to hide your feelings than show them. but, i don't know if this will help (cause even i don't take my own advise... I must be insane.) but, find someone who you can talk things out with. and don't think you are insane.... cause a lot of people feel like this... if you ever need to talk to me... just PM... i'll listen. good write, though, keep up the good work!!
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Re: insane
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 12:10:45 AM AEST
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| everyone is insane to an extent. this was a little rough around the edges, and i think smoothing those down would make this flow a bit better. |
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Re: insane
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by Sahara on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 02:34:33 PM AEST
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Sad, but beautifully put.
"Insanity is a virtue, sanity is merely a dream." ;) remember that because we're all bordering over the edge from time to time. |
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Re: insane
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 12:04:14 AM AEST
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| i like this poem. Something everybody can relate to. Everybody is insane and if there is somebody who isn't a little insane then they are really insane and those are ones you need to watch out for b/c they will go crazy on you. Good write your not the only one who feels that way. |
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