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all is fair in love and war

Contributed by angel_eyez on Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 06:41:45 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

with out a love you can feel lost
With a love you can feel lost
the lack of love you what what everyone else has
closeness and friendship
with the love you what what everyone else has
freedom and space

love can be like this the closeness the freedom
you have to learn to have one or the other
you want the greed you want everything
but thats the beauty of love.

with out a love you can feel lost
With a love you can feel lost
the lack of love you what what everyone else has
closeness and friendship
with the love you what what everyone else has
freedom and space

this is where love changes
the love changes inro lust
the jealoucy of it all.

'why can i have what she has its not fair'
'if i can't have someone niether can she'
'she didn't desearve him anyway'
'she lied ,she cheated'

it wasn't wrong what happened
she desearved all she got.
she took him away from me.
i only got what was mine.

with out a love you can feel lost
With a love you can feel lost
the lack of love you what what everyone else has
closeness and friendship
with the love you what what everyone else has
freedom and space

as the saying goes "all is fair in love and war"

Copyright © angel_eyez ... [ 2005-08-13 18:41:45]
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Re: all is fair in love and war (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 01:25:24 AM AEST
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Sorry, but nothing is ever fair in war and rarely in love. This reads more like lyrics to a song than a poem. You have 3 verses that are exactly the same, like that is the chorus.

It is true, some people are never satisfied with what they have, or the grass is always greener . . .

Rita

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