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end of summer fun
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 03:40:52 PM in AEST
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summer falls as frost creeps in my soul
another reign of water falling from the sky
last days of my fall bleak and barren like the trees
red my colour brittle my bones
stuck in this season of sadness
wanting endless beaches and blue skies
not the dark of the day
clean air and the taste of spring
a feeling i oh so miss
cold in the sun
end of summer fun
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Re: end of summer fun
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 04:01:48 PM AEST
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hi
very good write.I wish summer didnt have to end either,its my favorite season.Not only that,but there lye the best memories of my life.I liked this.t/c.peace.
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Re: end of summer fun
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 11:01:46 PM AEST
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good write, and i know lots of us feel like this. summer is the best (in my opinion) season. fall is peaceful, but winter is brittle. nice write, you expressed yourself well. good job, keep up the good work!!
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Re: end of summer fun
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 11:02:19 PM AEST
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Good work but it's still hot summer here in Arkansas, USA.
We could use lots of rain and a break from the 100 degree temps here.
huggs,
emy |
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