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My sleeping Love
Contributed by
wikedladi
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Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 03:15:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
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As i lay next to you i can not sleep
So i sit up real slow... trying to creep
Youre not an Angel and niether am I
This love has been tested...
These thoughts make me cry
Yet threw my tears all i can see is your face
An i start to remeber...
Just the touch of your hand can still make my heart race
So deep in sleep, you can not hear
I whisper i love you...
By the small of your ear
I feel your body shift, as you turn towards me
Your hands starts to move...
Its searches to see
All i can see is a look on your face
When i am found, the movement stops...
An once again i feel it start, my heart it wants to race
As i slowly lay down, i know all is well
For the thought of our love...
Has saved me from hell
I cuddle towards you
You grab me and hold...
An you relay onto me exactly what was told
You whisper to me
I love you..
An i am sure of this life... This is how it should be
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wikedladi
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2005-08-13 15:15:01]
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Re: My sleeping Love
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by MDodgen on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 07:17:18 PM AEST
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| very beautiful write. great images. |
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Re: My sleeping Love
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by O7NeVeS on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 07:26:07 PM AEST
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| This was just beautiful...great write. Tanya |
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Re: My sleeping Love
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 04:24:02 AM AEST
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Well written. The feeling of holding your love through the night night is almost unmatched. Feeling protected, yet at the same time you feel like you're protecting her (Or him, however it may be).
Take care.
David |
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