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Doomed One
Contributed by
TrowaDaryk
on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 02:26:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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A touch of death and a breathe of true
A drop of blood and I will undo
Peice by peice I tear all apart
Piercing stone to your heart
A clutch of doom and a taste of hate
A lick of flames and burning will the gate
Chess makes pressure and knife to create
Close it be life's negate
A part of everything and fates are sealed
A place of peace and imperfection revealed
I see my hole as only a piece
I now destroy and plead release
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TrowaDaryk
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2005-08-13 14:26:22]
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Re: Doomed One
(User Rating: 1 )
by wikedladi on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 02:37:24 PM AEST
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Such a powerful poem! This first line is great!
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Re: Doomed One
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by HatchetGirl on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 11:39:15 PM AEST
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| HEY baby!!! I love the poem you should have corrected your spelling thought.... love you lots |
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