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He's Waiting
Contributed by
gwenevere
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Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 01:26:06 PM in AEST
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Evening falls and shadows creep
Hush, be careful do not sleep
He's hiding underneath the stairs
Hurry, hurry, say your prayers
Feel the trembling of your knees
Hear the crying in the breeze
Of the lone wolf in despair
Don't you know he's waiting there
He is listening underground
Waiting 'til you make no sound
Slipping, creeping, in your dream
Smiling at your silent scream
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Re: He's Waiting
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by bernard2 on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 02:14:38 PM AEST
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| Gwenevere this takes me back to my childhood after I said my prayers I always looked under the bed. The only thing I ever saw though was the chamber pot. Great Poemkeep them coming from bernard2 |
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Re: He's Waiting
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by colinbaker62 on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 06:54:34 PM AEST
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This poem is wonderful in my view. Bravo !
Colin |
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Re: He's Waiting
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by Darkhorse71 on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 10:39:36 AM AEST
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| Incredibly descriptive!! but it brings me back to my childhood and my father. |
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