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The Hurt
Contributed by
lil_noel09
on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 10:40:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You hurt me so bad
Made freaking sad
You said you loved me
And that we would always be
Together until the end
Please, please can we try again?
Why am I such a fool?
You just used me as a tool
To mak you "great"
Your pride is what I hate
You suffocate on it
You stupid git
I love you I hate you
For all you do
Why are you so stupid?
I was struck hard by cupid
This pain is a burning flame
Your love I will never claim
My heart aches
As it slowly breaks
There is no sunshine
When your not mine
We were like Noah and Ally
And if I made a tally
You would see
That we were meant to be
But now its you loss
And it came at such a great cost
I think I'm finally ok
Better until another day
Copyright ©
lil_noel09
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2005-08-13 10:40:34]
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Re: The Hurt
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by Archie on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 11:07:57 AM AEST
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This reminds me of a song with the same title but a very different meaning
"But even though you hurt me
like no one else could do
I would never ever hurt you"
"Hurt" by The Manhattens |
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Re: The Hurt
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by lil_noel09 on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 01:42:18 PM AEST
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| ooo cool song thanks! i don't think i have ever heard it though. thanks again |
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Re: The Hurt
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by O7NeVeS on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 07:42:45 PM AEST
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| Good poem, i really enjoyed it...especially the part where u made reference to The Notebook. I love that movie!! Anyway good write...Tanya |
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Re: The Hurt
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by english-pea-pelter on
Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 12:31:03 PM AEST
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| Well done. No other way to put it. |
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Re: The Hurt
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by assassinatorgirl on
Sunday, 27th November 2005 @ 12:28:06 AM AEST
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| describes many stages of a breakup, nice job. |
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