Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 22-November 11:41:19 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Does Looks Matter?

Contributed by sweetolbaby on Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 11:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



you say it's the inside
not the outside
that makes a person
but you make yourself phony
cuz you, I and we
all know
that you want a man
w/ a healthy glow
soft skin
or maybe light skin
why light skin?
why not mohagany
or brown sugar
mixed w/ coffee
but does looks matter?
I want you
w/thes lips
so we can kiss
or else we didn't conversating at all
but does looks matter?
cuz me, I and we
and everybody know
we don't wanna
take an "ugly" person back to our mama
so they can diss
but neva get the chance
to understand
them as a person
Why isn't the quote"don't judge a book
by its cover"
enforced to the edge?
But does looks matter?
He gotta be this
gotta be that
this is the reason why
many people commit suicide
or feel so down
so they can be
that all around
guy or girl
trying to change their natural straight hair
in a curl
then fill their bodies w/ plastic
or change them w/ alterations
But does looks matter?
Yeah you thinking
I'm full of pain and insecurity
but take it from me
cuz i'm really *****
why people try 2 diss
other people
when we as people
should accept people 4 who they are?
but does looks matter?
pick up ya lip
you know i'm right
thought i whouldn't say *****
so therefore
just to let you know
cuz me, you, and we
know that society
portrays and makes
people assume
that looks do matter!
so what do you think?
just to let you know




Copyright © sweetolbaby ... [ 2003-01-13 23:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: Does Looks Matter? (User Rating: 1 )
by SmokinJoeEvil on Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 09:31:15 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
By the way, it is "DO looks matter". In this context, the word "does" is reserved for the singular case. Like "does this look matter". . . one look. When you are talking about looks (plural, and denoting all the particular aspects of a persons face, body, etc.) you use the word "do".


Re: Does Looks Matter? (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetolbaby on Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 12:28:22 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
First of all, i appreciate the "english lesson" on grammar but in poetry, me personally, i think you write down however you feel and don't care about just let it flow on the paper!


Re: Does Looks Matter? (User Rating: 1 )
by TundraHydra on Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 02:54:01 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
I agree with SmokinJoeEvil but other wise it is a good write. It is true to what is happening to people everyday. A person is rejected cuz of his/her looks. It really isnt right.




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com