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Kisses
Contributed by
spike
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Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 07:13:09 AM in AEST
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"Honeyed Seal of soft affections,
Tenderest pledge of future bliss,
Dearest tie of young connections,
love's first snowdrop, virgin kiss."
(Robert Burns 18th-century Scottish poet)
Baci, bacetti, chocolate kisses,
Hershey kisses, caramel sweet
Like liquid silk the taste caresses,
The lingering aroma of sinful treats.
Deep and wet, hot sticky clashes
Butterfly kisses with eye lashes!
Long, languorous kisses with serpentine tongue,
So much passion under the sun.
Ten little kisses on ten tiny toes,
Little fishy kisses on the end of your nose
Loud kisses, with rich wet smacks,
Soft gentle kisses, up and down your back.
And as I lay you down to sleep,
I’ll sing to you a thousand kisses deep……
Soft blown kisses across the ether
Nailed, by a guided cheek-seeker
Mysterious Cyber and E-kissing,
Virtual romance and online pashing.
Little dry pecks and air kisses,
Kisses blown across the room
Sweet kisses, the Kiss of Death,
Kisses that take away my breath.
And no matter how hard we try,
For all waits the long kiss goodbye……
XXXXX
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Re: Kisses
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 08:41:23 AM AEST
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ahhh...made me think of my first kiss...*smiles*
Kisses are sweet arent they.....warm write! |
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Re: Kisses
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by Wachumiri on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 05:26:06 AM AEST
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Yeah, that stupid goodbye one.... But then again, if it wasn´t for that one, the ´Hello´ kiss wouldn´t be as good.
Take care.
David |
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Re: Kisses
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 05:07:08 AM AEST
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| very sweet and romantic. i remember everytime i kiss the one that i love its always seems magical at least for me. good write |
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Re: Kisses
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 07:59:11 AM AEST
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Sweet poem.. ;-x Kisses are words of love unspoken...
Kinda reminds me of this..
"And if you insist on knowing my bliss
I'll tell you this
If you want to know what the reason is
I'll only smile when I lie, then I'll tell you this
(Because your kiss) your kiss is on my list
(Because your kiss) your kiss is on my list
Because your kiss is on my list of the best things in life."
~ Hall & Oates~
Keep up the great writing..Huggggggggs
~~~Michelle~~~ |
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Re: Kisses
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 01:31:11 PM AEST
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A very clever idea, this!
Who would think there were so many knids?
Not something I would have thought about, yet I'm glad you did!
Well done! |
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Re: Kisses
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 05:10:25 PM AEST
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Let me say in all sincerity, "damn! I wish I'd written that!!"
You got me smiling large with this one, spike. What
a clever little aussie you are! "kisses that take away my breath"
I LOVE that line. Isn't that why life is worth living?
Or at least, ONE of the things! lol
~B
*who loves this one very very much!*
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Re: Kisses
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 07:38:00 PM AEST
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| Ya penned the purty and passion of kisses to the point of the last kiss goodbye. Specially like the way you paint the picture of butterfly, ten little kisses and fishy kiss. A sensitivity in this poem that you seem to display without effort, just a lot of mastery. |
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Re: Kisses
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by elle on
Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 11:55:33 AM AEST
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| mmmmm. . . such a delicious, provocative write. elle |
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