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Dying for a fag.
Contributed by
lillyjane
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Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 06:17:46 AM in AEST
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In the darkness my heart pounds,
I hear his foot steps on the ground,
I walk on faster, I can taste the fear,
I can hear his breath, as he gets near,
I start to run, he runs to,
I see some bushes, and run through,
my legs are torn from thorns and pines,
I keep on running, his still behind,
I feel his hand, I see his glove,
I see his face, leer from above,
Then......Have you got a light love?
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Re: Dying for a fag.
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by bernard2 on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 09:56:15 AM AEST
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| Good suspense poem. I liked the ending what a relief. just a light for his fag, Top marks from bernard2 |
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Re: Dying for a fag.
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by Randyjohnson on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 06:03:56 PM AEST
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| You must be British. I like England and I like your poem. Good work. |
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Re: Dying for a fag.
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 01:45:07 AM AEST
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Did you bust his bullocks with a nice firm kick? I would have. Don't smoke, sorry! lol
You are quite a great commedienne.
Rita |
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Re: Dying for a fag.
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 09:26:21 AM AEST
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lillyjane.........you rascal :-)
keep em coming, might even start smoking (only joking) |
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Re: Dying for a fag.
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by Manda2 on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 04:20:32 PM AEST
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| Brillian! Full of suspense until the very end. |
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Re: Dying for a fag.
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by maestar on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 04:40:22 PM AEST
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Really funny
Loved it |
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