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Rebel Inside of ME
Contributed by
Ineedanap
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Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 02:11:03 AM in AEST
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My body is fighting
To release itself from this plastic mold
Crafted by the hands of many
Both young and old
How my body longs to be
What is was just a short while ago
To bang my head to death metal beands
And of course, be peirced from head to toe
My body longs once more
To be the rebel it once was back then
To shed this ridiculous image
And be me, instead
Too long have i been giving
Into a false reality
An image pleasing to my parents
But not at all agreeing with me
So here comes my wild side
The rebellious rocker that never went away
And i hate to tell you this
But she's here to stay
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Ineedanap
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2005-08-13 02:11:03]
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Re: Rebel Inside of ME
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by Doriens_Picture on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 03:01:39 AM AEST
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yea i know how you feel
i can never be me around my family
they hate it when i wear make up
but what ever |
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Re: Rebel Inside of ME
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by robertdavidson on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 07:28:44 AM AEST
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I can really feel the desperatre emotion behind this poem. The struggle for self-realisation is our strongest and most difficult quest. Everyone has experrienced this. Well done.
Robert Davidson. |
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Re: Rebel Inside of ME
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 09:04:28 AM AEST
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you go....be yourself if it makes you happy!!
rOcK oN......! |
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Re: Rebel Inside of ME
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 02:55:03 PM AEST
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| Can completly relate... I can still remember my parents' expressions when I came home with my nose pierced... great poem... keep up the good work!!! |
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Re: Rebel Inside of ME
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by Darkhorse71 on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 08:39:44 AM AEST
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Great poem, I can really feel your turmoil. May the Rebellious Rocker never fade away!!
john |
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