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YoU CaN!
Contributed by
chaos_01
on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 10:59:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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You can capture the whole moment with
A single flash of a camera
You can love someone with a single kiss
You can save a child by reaching
into your pocket
You can make someone smile by caring
You can clean your room buy using your
Two hands
You can write a song from experience
You can achieve the impossible by trying
You can fall in love by trusting
You can read this poem with your eyes
You can think it's bad or good with your thoughts
And you can be free by letting everything disappear!
Copyright ©
chaos_01
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2005-08-12 22:59:41]
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Re: YoU CaN!
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 12:09:48 AM AEST
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| Nice write, though your mix of upper and lower case letters messes with my eyeballs. LOL Thanks for sharing this with us. Peace to you. Laura |
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Re: YoU CaN!
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 02:10:41 AM AEST
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And you can love so mucu it hurts. I´m sorry, I´m a little sad and pessimistic right now, I apologize.
I do like the style and thought process put into this. Good job.
Take care.
David |
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Re: YoU CaN!
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 09:11:45 AM AEST
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liberating indeed!!!!
we sure can....but the question is WILL we??...
A pleasure to read. |
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