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Contributed by
lostwithoutyou
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Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 09:24:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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You're the one to chase the storms away,
You're the one who is there for me day after day.
Thru good times and bad,
No matter what you have helped me stand.
You're the one I go to when things get bad,
You stop my tears when I am sad.
I know you'll be there to help me thru,
Without a friend like you I have no clue what I'd do.
I know I can come to you about anything,
All tho you don't always have the answers.
I thank God for putting the stars in the sky,
I thank God for putting you by my side.
I thank you for standing by me,
Our friendship is the best there could ever be.
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lostwithoutyou
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2005-08-12 21:24:24] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Close.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ineedanap on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 02:18:09 AM AEST (User
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Very touching friendship poem. i like it |
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Re: Close.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 11:43:56 AM AEST (User
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You´re welcome, Brina.
I do what I can.
Take care.
David |
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Re: Close.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 12:28:11 AM AEST (User
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*smiles*
Nice work, Brina. 'through' looks better than 'thru' in poetry, though. But no matter.
Andrew |
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Re: Close.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 09:42:02 AM AEST (User
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I can relate to this poem, that makes it easier to understand the message in it, well done. |
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Re: Close.
(User Rating: 1 ) by ever1der on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 12:25:04 AM AEST (User
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It's nice to have a friend like that..and it's nice when you show appreciation ..nice job. |
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