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Angel’s Breath
Contributed by
sride686
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Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 08:11:17 PM in AEST
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Your love is twisted so deep in my grooves
Every thought that I think leads straight to you
You are part of my life in so many ways
And this love I have will never change
Angels breath that caresses my soul
Emotions hang with in your control
Beautiful thoughts that grow so clear
I’d give my life to feel you here
Blue dark shades that cover my eyes
Dust in my voice as it starts to grow dry
A mental thought and a mental note
Sexual thoughts as my heart gets provoked
Vivid dreams as I see your face
Lust in love invades this place
Kisses so soft that they touch my soul
Rapped up in a love that is out of control
A day dream away on another day
Soon I’ll return but its not yet that day
I lay my head and welcome the night
To feel your presence with in my mind
Time will soon fade till we’re together as one
And the hurt in my heart you will soon over come
~Steve~
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Re: Angel’s Breath
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by juliette on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 08:49:41 PM AEST
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Oh Steve - I can't wait for you to be reunited either! It takes a lot to bring a tear to my eyes these days......this is very well written and so, so sweet. God bless you and keep you safe, and may he rush your return home to your beloved! Thanks for sharing!
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Re: Angel’s Breath
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 09:39:31 PM AEST
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This is a deeply touching write. I know you both miss each other so much. It is hard, I know, I have lived through it. Just a different war. Keep your strength and faith and God bless you both.
hugs,
Rita |
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Re: Angel’s Breath
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 11:37:07 PM AEST
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beautiful poem steve and sentimental wish u the best and a safe journey my friend . . .
Ben |
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Re: Angel’s Breath
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by LolaWhite on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 12:51:47 AM AEST
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A day dream away on another day
Soon I’ll return but its not yet that day
I lay my head and welcome the night
To feel your presence with in my mind
Time will soon fade till we’re together as one
And the hurt in my heart you will soon over come
My Steve, my soldier and my love; a beautiful and heart felt write from you yet again. I treasure your words and hold them in my heart until you return...until then I too will dream of you and wait until time brings us together again. A beautifully written, lovely and emotional piece. Thank you for sharing it.
Your Lea-Ann |
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Re: Angel’s Breath
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by gwenevere on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 05:08:46 AM AEST
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| A beautiful poem of love and devotion.May you soon be reunited, never to be parted again, Ros |
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Re: Angel’s Breath
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by BtrFlyDrms on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 12:07:19 PM AEST
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| i know what its like to miss a loved one. my 3 brothers have all served over seas as is my bestr friend and i recently lost another best friend due to a road side bomb 2 months ago. I will light a candle for you and wish god speed for a safe return. |
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Re: Angel’s Breath
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 09:48:04 AM AEST
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| A powerful, emotional, piece, about the heartache of love apart, well written, may you be reunited soon. |
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Re: Angel’s Breath
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 04:46:54 PM AEST
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very powerful and so much devotion .
awsome job on this write my freind.
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Re: Angel’s Breath
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 05:31:09 PM AEST
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Powerful write.. Tears bursting. Take care, you are much loved..
I pray for you and all the soldiers keeping us safe.
More tears.. I was raised up under WW11 fears.
Everytime a plane went over my father made me lay on the ground. He is in heaven now, and I am glad he is because I don't think he could take much more for what our world is going through.
My neighbor next door is having a very difficult time as well, she served in the nam war...
As God is my witness, you will be safe and return home to your loved one ('s) and we at YPDC is waiting with open arms also.
Be well, love and huggs from me,
Raquel Leah :D
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Re: Angel’s Breath
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 07:35:11 PM AEST
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so much love in this poem
i can relate to this
when someone special tome killed themself
i would give my life to feel her again
i hope you see your wife and daughter soon
-->Rae |
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